February 14, 2011

Microfiction: Rhapsody

Thanks to Susan for hosting
Microfiction Monday
where a picture paints 140 characters, or even fewer.
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On this Valentine's Day, my post titled Rhapsody is the ecstatic expression of feelings of the young man in the photograph below to the woman he loves (while ignoring the chaperones around her...haha!) :


I love your glances. Each time you smile, I skip a heartbeat. With your radiant face and mellifluous voice, you set my heart on a rhapsody. Happy Valentine’s Day my love.
–140–

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You are beautiful, you’re great,
Then, why this distance
Oh, Ms. Ballentine Che?
Come closer to me, I can’t wait
Until the day you’ll wed me
On Valentine’s Day!
–132–

34 comments:

Melanie Sherman said...

That is a sweeeeet Valentine. Very nice.

anthonynorth said...

Lovely romance. Enjoyed it.

Rekha said...

Both are echoing sweet sentiments...very enjoyable.

Deborah said...

Perfect for today, lovely :o)

Madeleine said...

Very poetic and beautiful :O)

Akelamalu said...

Romance on Valentines Day, perfect!

5thsister said...

Both very sentimentally sweet! They deserve a great big AWWWWWWW!

izzy said...

Good job- I'm definitely not so
romantic! thanks.

Priyanka Bhowmick said...

beautiful words of love.. happy valentines'

Mridula said...

How romantic!

Dianne said...

beautiful romantic writing

thanks for asking about Iza, she is recovering nicely and I will be posting some pics and an update in a day or two
caring for her has been a full time job since she got home

Peggy said...

I love your romantic twist.
I went along the same theme.
Love is rekindled, for a least a day! Really enjoyed reading this!

Diane said...

You're such a romantic. Great ones! :O)

Dejemonos sorprender said...

Beautiful.. wish you a nice time :)

jabblog said...

Sweet Valentine's Day responses :-)

Sylvia K said...

Beautiful, romantic takes on the pic of the day! Ah, and we can all use a little romance in our lives -- even if it's from a story!! Have a great week!

Sylvia

Photo Cache said...

So appropriate for the times. This post reminds me of myself 20 years ago :)

Pooch said...

Sweet and romantic. Perfect for today.
:)

DeeBee L. said...

It's a lovely post for Valentine's day. DeeBee :)

Short Poems said...

That is a sweet and poetic :)

Grandma's Goulash said...

Perfectly for the day. Good MM.

My MM: Valentine Blunder

EG Wow said...

Very romantic! Happy Valentine's Day!

sylviamorice said...

Nice to know that romance is still alive and healthy! Good stories for Valentine's Day!

Susan Fobes said...

A romantic at heart-very nice!

sonia said...

So sweet and romantic!

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

Beautifully romantic to suit the day and the picture. Lovely!

Jinksy said...

Melliflous words! LOL

Michael G-G said...

Perfect ones for the Day!

Have a great week.

ruthi said...

awwww. so sweet. i long to hear those words from hubby. wink*

Jim said...

I like your Valentines.
The first one is precious. The second reminds me of The Spider and the Fly.
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Margaret said...

Romance won the day, I see. :)

Trotter said...

Hope you had a great day!!

Rosadimaggio63 said...

Bella immagine romantica !

shooting star said...

ignoring the chaperones!!...hehhehe...found that the most funniest observation in the pic!!