February 14, 2011

Microfiction: Rhapsody

Thanks to Susan for hosting
Microfiction Monday
where a picture paints 140 characters, or even fewer.
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On this Valentine's Day, my post titled Rhapsody is the ecstatic expression of feelings of the young man in the photograph below to the woman he loves (while ignoring the chaperones around her...haha!) :


I love your glances. Each time you smile, I skip a heartbeat. With your radiant face and mellifluous voice, you set my heart on a rhapsody. Happy Valentine’s Day my love.
–140–

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You are beautiful, you’re great,
Then, why this distance
Oh, Ms. Ballentine Che?
Come closer to me, I can’t wait
Until the day you’ll wed me
On Valentine’s Day!
–132–

34 comments:

  1. That is a sweeeeet Valentine. Very nice.

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  2. Lovely romance. Enjoyed it.

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  3. Both are echoing sweet sentiments...very enjoyable.

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  4. Perfect for today, lovely :o)

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  5. Very poetic and beautiful :O)

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  6. Romance on Valentines Day, perfect!

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  7. Both very sentimentally sweet! They deserve a great big AWWWWWWW!

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  8. Good job- I'm definitely not so
    romantic! thanks.

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  9. beautiful words of love.. happy valentines'

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  10. beautiful romantic writing

    thanks for asking about Iza, she is recovering nicely and I will be posting some pics and an update in a day or two
    caring for her has been a full time job since she got home

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  11. I love your romantic twist.
    I went along the same theme.
    Love is rekindled, for a least a day! Really enjoyed reading this!

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  12. You're such a romantic. Great ones! :O)

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  13. Beautiful.. wish you a nice time :)

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  14. Sweet Valentine's Day responses :-)

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  15. Beautiful, romantic takes on the pic of the day! Ah, and we can all use a little romance in our lives -- even if it's from a story!! Have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  16. So appropriate for the times. This post reminds me of myself 20 years ago :)

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  17. Sweet and romantic. Perfect for today.
    :)

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  18. It's a lovely post for Valentine's day. DeeBee :)

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  19. That is a sweet and poetic :)

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  20. Very romantic! Happy Valentine's Day!

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  21. Nice to know that romance is still alive and healthy! Good stories for Valentine's Day!

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  22. A romantic at heart-very nice!

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  23. So sweet and romantic!

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  24. Beautifully romantic to suit the day and the picture. Lovely!

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  25. Perfect ones for the Day!

    Have a great week.

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  26. awwww. so sweet. i long to hear those words from hubby. wink*

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  27. I like your Valentines.
    The first one is precious. The second reminds me of The Spider and the Fly.
    ..

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  28. Romance won the day, I see. :)

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  29. Hope you had a great day!!

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  30. ignoring the chaperones!!...hehhehe...found that the most funniest observation in the pic!!

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Whatever it is..go right ahead!